如果你用了這五種表達(dá),那簡(jiǎn)直就是分分鐘激怒考官的節(jié)奏,尤其是當(dāng)你在寫作的時(shí)候。我們還附上了雅思易錯(cuò)詞匯。??绝唫冺樌ㄟ^雅思!
1、You are trying too hard!
大難詞、不合適的習(xí)語、長(zhǎng)難句
許多同學(xué)學(xué)會(huì)了一大堆的大難詞,費(fèi)勁兒的記住了,想在考試中用,可是歪果仁都不常用的難詞你卻寫了,用的不正確不合適,詞不對(duì)意。大概就是如果你是語文老師,看到了這些的文章的感受:
還有就是習(xí)語用的不準(zhǔn)確,要不就是一個(gè)習(xí)語全世界考生都用!大概所有雅思考生都會(huì)寫“A coin has two sides”或者“A double -edged sword”..吧。
長(zhǎng)難句寫的不對(duì):好幾個(gè)主語和動(dòng)詞還沒有連接詞、沒有主語、動(dòng)詞形式不正確等。這么不地道的寫法,考官能不煩嗎?
Simple is the Best(看個(gè)栗子):
The CEO tenure at the company was abbreviated due to his reluctance to integrate more females into upper managerial posts,thereby drawing the ire of the Board who consequently relieved him of his duties.
首先我要說這個(gè)句子是正確的,但是如果你能寫出這樣的句子來,那么你就把這篇文章關(guān)了,直接去考試吧!你的水平考個(gè)7都算低的~
但是,hin多同學(xué)是試著想寫這樣的句子,但是寫不出來。所以你會(huì)出現(xiàn)hin多hin多錯(cuò)誤,在沒有把握的情況下,就把句子縮短,寫簡(jiǎn)單句:
The CEO's time was cut short because he wouldn't promote women to top positions,which angered the Board who then fired him.
哦!你看懂了吧......
再說接下來幾點(diǎn)之前,我們?cè)賮砜磦€(gè)栗子:
Topic: Parents makes the best teacher. 就是說家長(zhǎng)是孩子最好的老師,你同意不同意?
.......(Introduction 忽略,但是先假設(shè)這是一篇同意話題觀點(diǎn)的文章)
Firstly,parents know their child best,including what he likes and doesn't like,such as books he likes to read ,or favorite science topics.Parents can also talk to the child's teacher and find out from them how to hlep him at home. They can also monitor how much TV he watches. Cutting down on this might help his concentration.
就以這個(gè)片段為例,說說大家常出現(xiàn)的問題,也是考官一看就不會(huì)給你高分的原因!
2、 NO topic sentence. (沒有論點(diǎn),就是沒有主題句)
這是在考驗(yàn)考官的總結(jié)能力!看看他能不能神總結(jié)一下...對(duì)嗎?
這樣是錯(cuò)誤的,可以說每一段必須要有一個(gè)主題句!
3、Too much ideas.
“Parents know their child best,including what he likes and doesn't like,such as books he likes to read ,or favorite science topics.”
最了解他的孩子,他喜歡,他不喜歡,他喜歡讀書,喜歡這樣的科學(xué)主題!那你到底要說什么?這還放在了這個(gè)段落的開頭段!太多的觀點(diǎn)想表述了,更加雜亂無章了....
其實(shí)只要改變一下“Parents know their child best,”把逗號(hào)改成句號(hào),這就是一個(gè)topic sentence,之后有原因,有例子去佐證論點(diǎn),這才是正確的。
觀點(diǎn)多不成問題,但是我們首先要把每一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)延展說明白,再集合在一起去證明自己的觀點(diǎn)才是科學(xué)的!集合!
4、Good point,no examples.
觀點(diǎn)是好的,但是沒有例子,父母可以干這個(gè)可以干那,把觀點(diǎn)都扔在了這個(gè)片段里面,但是沒有例子!
比如父母知道孩子喜歡讀書,那喜歡讀什么書呢?可以來個(gè)栗子,喜歡科幻類、寵物類等等。例子才會(huì)讓文章看起來更真實(shí)!寫中文議論文的時(shí)候,我們不是也要背栗子嘛,同理。
5、I think 出現(xiàn)四次五次六次 pet peeve (考官經(jīng)常抱怨的問題)
I agree or I disagree,I think,In my opinion 這樣的句子在文章中出現(xiàn)一次就好!Introduction里說完I my 等等這種第一人稱所在的話語,說完,ok ,done!別再在conclusion再說I、 my、 mine、 we等等再來一遍!
這個(gè)問題是反復(fù)強(qiáng)調(diào),反復(fù)出現(xiàn),并且考官很煩的一種錯(cuò)誤!
最后再來看看哪些單詞是雅思中高頻出錯(cuò)的單詞:(來自劍橋)